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noname1 :) It is my first time using this website. I heard that If I write something, maybe someone will come to correct this for me.(Is it? haha..) It's been a long time not using English, maybe it was since I came to China last year. Last semester, I studied in Tianjin (moved to Qingdao now :D) and met lots of lovely, amazing and kind Chinese friends. Last week, I went on a 9-hour-journey to go see my friend in Dezhou who helped me a lot in Tianjin. Because I really reaaally love to drink Zhenzhunaicha(milk tea with pearls?), After eating lunch, I went to buy some milk tea like everyday and came across a Chinese girl who worked for that shop. In that period, I had no Chinese friend so I screwed up my courages, broke the ice, and talked to her and soon we became a good friend of each other. Since then, I went that Naicha shop everyday and ate lunch with her, batther ed the breeze, and sometimes taught her some Korean. Since She was graduate student of Tianjin university, I mean, She was so clever :), learned very fast, so sometimes made me astonished. :) But as every meeting has its farewell, we had to stay in different province and haven't met for a bit long time, so I deceided to go to see her, even though it was soooo far from here, Qingdao. Sometimes I think it's very thankful to speak different languages because I can make friends with lots of amazing people who are using different kind of languages and living in a different countries. 더 열심히 해야지>,<

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It is my first time using this website. I heard that If I write something, maybe someone will come to correct this for me.(Is it? haha..)
It's been a long time SINCE I USED English, maybe it was LAST YEAR, BEFORE I came to China.
Last semester, I studied in Tianjin (moved to Qingdao now :D) and met lots of lovely, amazing and kind Chinese friends. Last week, I went on a 9-hour-journey to go see my friend in Dezhou who helped me a lot in Tianjin.
Because I really really love to drink Zhenzhunaicha (milk tea with pearls?), After eating lunch, I went to buy some milk tea like every day and came across a Chinese girl who worked AT that shop.
In that period, I had no Chinese friend so I screwed up my courages, broke the ice, and talked to her and soon we became a good friend of each other.
Since then, I went that Naicha shop everyday and ate lunch with her, BATTLED the breeze, and sometimes taught her some Korean. Since she was graduate student of Tianjin University, I mean, she was so clever :), SHE learned very fast, sometimes SHE EVEN made me astonished. :)
But as every meeting has its farewell, we had to stay in different provinceS and haven't met for a bit OF A long time, so I decided to go to see her, even though it was soooo far from here, Qingdao.
Sometimes I think I’M very FORTUNATE to BE ABLE TO speak different languages, because I can make friends with lots of amazing people who are using different kindS of languages and living in different countries.
더 열심히 해야지>,<

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CAPITALS = CORRECTIONS
- “I screwed up my courages” = I don’t fully understand what you mean, but could you mean = “I sucked up my courage…” or “I threw away my doubts…”?
- “ I think it's very thankful to speak different languages” = I understand what you mean, but this sentence is not grammatically correct = it is better to say “I’m very fortunate to be able to speak different languages” = this is better


Your English is amazing! You have even learned Chinese! Whoa! I’m in awe, hopefully one day I can speak this good in Korean, like you speak in English!! Good Luck!

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Thx but it still is meaningful to me :)
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Try to write few but meaningful words

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