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The amazing adventures of a thirsting fox It was a sunny and hot afternoon. A fox who had been hunting all day felt very thirsty, then the fox thought: I would like to find water to drink. In that instant she saw a big bunch of juicy grapes hanging from a very high grape arbor . The grapes seemed mature and full of juice. Then the fox said while her mouth was drooling : Wow ! oh oh !!! That juice will satiate my thirsty !! Then the fox stood on tiptoes to try catch the grapes but it were out her reach. Then the fox jumped and jumped again and again but she could not reach the grapes. After that, the fox was more thirsty and tired that ever. Finally the fox said angry: What a fool am I !!!! The grapes are inmature (green) and for that reason it should not be eaten !! Any way, What for I need this ugly grapes? On second thought, I'm not so so thirsty .

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The amazing adventures of a thirsting (o, thirsty) fox

It was a sunny and hot afternoon. A fox who had been hunting all day felt very thirsty, then the fox thought: I would like to find water to drink. In that instant she saw a big bunch of juicy grapes hanging from a very high grape arbor . The grapes seemed (o, looked) mature and full of juice. Then the fox said, while her mouth was drooling : Wow ! Oh oh !!! That juice will satiate my thirst !!

Then the fox stood on tiptoes to try catch grab/pick the grapes but it they (the grapes) were out her reach. Then the fox jumped and jumped again and again but she could not reach the grapes. After that, the fox was more thirsty and tired that ever.

Finally the fox said angrily: What a fool am I !!!! The grapes are inmature (green) and for that reason it they (the grapes, plural) should not be eaten !! Any way, What for I why do I need this those ugly grapes? On second thought, I'm not so so thirsty .

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