DIARY OF SUPER POWER

10th March Weather: raining 

I wake woke up when the rain started and I do did it again.

Every day, I will find a stranger and I will read his mind. Yes, I have some a super power , someone once called it 'Psychic abilities'. 

I don't remember how many times I have done (used) it, maybe 1000, maybe more than 1000. 

This man looks like a hobo, a very young hobo, his age can not be over 30. You will never know can't see the colour of his clothes, his clothes's colour, because it's looks like dark blue, black and maybe green. 

His mind is a little bit bored boring, something about food, something about money and something about a woman. Well really bored boring. So I take a deep breath and decide to ended (stop) it. While But when I close the window curtain I realise I read something different else. Something still form the hobo, but it's seems more dark, more ambition ambitious and bloody. So I saw look at him again.

I saw a young man, just standing, near by the hobo, and they it looked like they were talking together. The hobo looked like he was getting angry，yes the young people insulting person must have insulted him. 

The hobo's mind is was very erratic, it seemed like he is was fighting within himself. One First he said (thought) : I'm gonna kill him. And then other he said (thought) : don't!

I observed that the hobo's hand had become different (while I was looking at it), it's was white, and I even saw some ice present appear from his finger. He has had super powers too! 

I'm afraid that the young man will die, as a result I try to use my superpower to tell the young man: Run!

Before I could tell him that, the hobo just put his hand down. He didn't kill him? He didn't kill him!

In the hobo's mind I saw he heard him muttered: I'm not a killer, also the my power shouldn't hurt anybody.

Then I saw the hobo say something to the young man. Something like ask the respect. I think he was asking for respect. I closed my curtain, that was enough for today it's enough.

"Bad weather but nice day!" I told myself.




ps: I should describe some super power...
well I don't know is if it looks like some a superhero's diary? :)

Really nice story Fio. You have definitely tried a complex structure in your tenses for this one. We can go over it together whenever you are ready. Peace. Alasdair

DIARY OF SUPER POWER

10th March Weather: raining 

I wake up when the rain started, and I do it again.

Every day, I will find a stranger. and I will read his mind. Yes, I have some super power , someone called it Psychic abilities. 

I don't remember how many times I have done it, maybe 1000 maybe more than 1000. 

This man looks like a hobo, a very young hobo, his age can not be over 30. you will never know his clothes's color, because it's looks like darkblue,black and maybe green. 

His mind is a little bit bored, something about food, something about money and something about woman. Well really bored. So I take a deep breath and decide ended it. While when I close the window curtain i realise i read something different. something still form the hobo but it's seems more dark more ambition and bloody. So I saw him again.

I saw a young man just stand near by the hobo, and they looks talking together. The hobo looks get angry，yes the young people insulting him. 

The hobo's mind is very erratic, seems like he is fight with himself. One says : I gonna kill him. And the other says: don't!

I observed that the hobo's hand become different, it's white, and I even saw some ice present from his finger. He has super power too! 

I'm afraid that the young man will die, as a result I try to use my superpower to tell the young man: Run!

Before that, the hobo just put his hand down. He didn't kill him? He didn't kill him!

In the hobo's mind I saw he muttered: I'm not a killer, also the power shouldn't hurt anybody.

Then I saw the hobo say something to the young man. Something like ask the respect. I closed my curtain, today it's enough.

"Bad weather but nice day!" I told myself.

ps: I should describe some super power...
well I don't know is it looks like some superhero's diary? :)

'I wake up when the rain started' : I wake up when the rain starts [retain present tense] otherwise 'I woke up when the rain started [past tense]
'his clothes's color' : the colour of his clothes
'because it's looks like . . ' : but they look like . .
'darkblue,black and maybe green' : dark blue,black, and maybe green
'Well really bored' : Well, really bored
'decide ended it' : decide to end it
'While when I close' : When I close
'something different. something still form the hobo but it's seems more dark more ambition and bloody' :
something different, still from the hobo but it seems darker, with more ambition, and bloody
'stand near by the hobo' : stand nearby
'they looks talking together' : they look as if they are talking / they seem to be talking
'The hobo looks get angry' : The hobo seems to get angry
'the young people insulting him' : the young man is insulting him
'seems like he is fight with himself' : it seems like/as though he is fighting himself
'hand become different' : hand becomes different
'as a result I try to . . ' : so I try to . .
'like ask the respect' : like 'show respect' / like asking for respect
'today it's enough. ' : it's enough for today

'well I don't know is it looks like some superhero's diary?' :

Well, I don't know.  Does it look like some superhero's diary?

I've never seen a superhero's diary, so I can't tell you, but I would imagine that they don't keep diaries - they are too busy saving the world !