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My school I'm studying in university of information technology in VietNam. I feel nervous when I went to university for the first time. When I was a freshman, I didn't have many friends. I went to school when I had lessons, then I went home after that, I didn't go to anywhere or talk to anyone, I felt lonely at that time, but I don't miss my home, it was so crayzy !!! After the fisrt year, I had more friends, I spent all my time with them, we created a team - a team with 6 teammates, we helped each other in studying and in our life. I used to think that we would be a team forever, but the truth is different, we recognized that it was impossible to work with 6 people. After that, my team was divided into 2 small teams. That is the worst thing that I have had. I felt lost at that time. Now, I'm a junior. In this time, I just want to work independently. I don't want to work with anyone. I have 5 close firiends here. I help me in studying, giving me advices when I need. That's all.

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I'm studying information technology in at a university of in VietNam (OR, 'at the University of Vietnam"). I felt nervous when I went to the university for the first time. When I was a freshman, I didn't have many friends. I went to school when I had lessons, then I went home after that. I didn't go to anywhere or talk to anyone, and I felt lonely at that time. But I didn't miss my home, it was so crazy!!!
After the first year, I had more friends, and I spent all my time with them, as we created a team, a team with six teammates. We helped each other in/with studying and in our lives. I used to think that we would be a team forever, but the truth was different. We recognized that it was impossible to work with six people. After that, my team was divided into two small teams. That was the worst thing that I had experienced. I felt lost at that time.
Now, I'm a junior, and at this time, I just want to work independently. I don't want to work with anyone. I have five close firiends here. They help me with studying and giving me advices when I need. That's all.

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