Be happy

There are few things in the life (solo se usa "the" con cosas especificas, no con ideas) that are important. One of those these things is being happy. The family, friends and love are also important, but today I will talk about happiness.

Is the moment It's time to say what is the happiness for me. I think that the happiness means more than just (para contrastar mas) a superficial description (quizas "simple emotion" seria mejor). It's feeling experiencing the life with all the senses involved being conscient of all. The happiness is not only being happy, it's also feeling all of the feelings emotions (es mejor no repetir "feeling" 2 veces). I think that the happiness appears in the most important moments times of a person's life...but also in the lesser moments. (para no repetir "moments")

We need to be open minded to understand the life and to be happy. All the people Everyone ("all the people" es como un grupo especifico) can be happy and sometimes the people those (pronombre --> para no repetir "the people" --> "los que") that have more things is are less happy than others (mas que uno) that live in the misery ("live/living in misery" = una buena expresion). It's not a matter of having more or less; (punto y coma para combinar las dos ideas relatadas) the question is, are we fine with all we have?

The good thing is we can be more and more even happy than before.

Buenisimo Irene!  Estoy de acuerdo...ser feliz es lo mas importante en la vida.

Unas pocas cosas...

1.  No uses "the" con ideas abstractas...deberias usarlo cuando estas hablando de una cosa especifica (pej, "the dog")

2.  La ultima frase me parece una idea nueva....pero la terminas abruptamente.  Yo diria mas sobre lo que una persona tiene que hacer para ser aun mas feliz.

3.  Trata de encontrar otros sinonimos para reemplacer "happy".  En ingles es una palabra bien comun y ordinaria.  Si tu meta es mostrar a la gente que la felicidad no es tan simple, deberias usar otras palabras para que vean eso. (pej...joy, exhilaration, satisfaction).

Pero bien hecho!