Some movies that touched me (spoiler)

There are several films that have moved me. I'm going to talk about some of them.

Requiem for a Dream: The atmosphere reached created in this film is frightening. At the begining, the characters haven't got too much trouble don't have too many troubles, but the situation becomes gets creepy early on in the movie. Furthermore, the great soundtrack helps to increase this scary sensation. In addition, in my opinion the actors' performance is awesome.

Titanic: This film caused me anguish. After crashing into the iceberg the situation becomes chaotic. People running around, children crying loudly, etc. The water begins to flood the chambers. The doors are closed. Some members of the crew are locked in. People start dying.

What's Eating Gilbert Grape?: Nice film. Depp looks after his little brother DiCaprio, who is a mentally disabled person. They are fatherless boys. In addition, their mother is obese and cannot go out from home leave the house. Depp charges with the takes charge of these responsibilities. The story takes place in a countryside village. Everyday Every day seems the same day, but new things could happen...

Another solid piece of writing, Gabriel, and nice to read about your favourite films!

The corrections I've made aren't always due to actual grammatical errors. Instead, I've changed a couple of things to sound more colloquial. Your English seems great already, and using more colloquial phrases and constructions will make it even more convincing. For example, I generally use 'get' rather than 'become' - "it's getting creepy", "I'm getting cold" and so on.

Hope the corrections help!

Some movies that touched me (spoiler)

There are several films that moved me. I'm going to talk about some of them.

Requiem for a Dream: The atmosphere reached created in this film is frightening. At the beginning, the characters haven't gotten into too much trouble, but the situation becomes creepy early on in the movie. Furthermore, the great soundtrack helps to increase this scary sensation. In addition, in my opinion the actors' performance is was awesome.

Titanic: This film caused me anguish ("anguish" es muy fuerte...como un dolor fisico y intenso...quizas "heartache" o "sadness" sería mejor). After crashing into the iceberg the situation becomes chaotic. People running around, children crying loud, etc. The water begins to flood the chambers. The doors are closed. Some members of the crew are locked in. People start dying.

What's Eating Gilbert Grape?: Nice film. Depp looks after his little brother DiCaprio, who is a mentally disabled person. They are fatherless boys. In addition, their mother is obese and cannot go out from home. Depp is put in charge of charges with the responsibilities. The story takes place in a countryside village. Everyday seems the same day, but new things could happen...

Bien hecho...pero para mí "Requiem for a Dream" fue demasiado con todas las pesadillas me daban!!