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Working from home
I have the opportunity to work from home, sometimes it is great but sometimes it's not. People think that working from home is always great and some people dream about it. However there are many distractions at home, you really need to be/stay focused on your work, otherwise the times goes and you are not going to be able to finish your tasks on time.
I love to play video games and to watch movies, and sometimes it is really hard to focus on the work because of that. In order to work from home you need to be a very responsible person, you also need to deliver your assignments on time, but overall/most of all you need to be professional.
In the image below "Robotin" is taking my workspace and he doesn't allows me to work anymore xD
Working from home
I have the opportunity to work from home. Sometimes it is great, but sometimes it is not. People think that working from home is always great and some people dream about it. However there are many distractions at home, when you really need to get focus on your work. Otherwise the times goes and you are not going to be able to finish your tasks on time.
I love to play video games and to watch movies, and sometimes it is really hard to focus on the work because of that. In order to work from home you need to be a very responsible person, you also need to deliver your assignments on time, but overall you need to be professional.
In the image below "Robotin" is taking my workspace and he doesn't allows me to work anymore xD
Good job! You might want to try shorter sentences. Some of the original sentences would be considered run-on sentences, so that is why I broke them up a bit. This entry made me laugh, I also work from home and sometimes my distraction is this website. :)
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