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Fifty-word story Hi Everyone, Please, for your assistance if it is there any mistakes. This is a fifty-word story (not including the title) -------------- A holiday romance It was the middle of the summer in the hot month of August, it was boiling a lot. Me and my wife were in a SPA resort RIU Pravetz, where we had a lot of fun and relax. We liked especially the Salted lake for aqua-meditation and Steam bath

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A holiday romance


It was the middle of the summer in the boiling hot month of August, [and it was really humid/ and we were melting :) ] it was boiling a lot. Me and m My wife and I were in at a spa resort [called] RIU Pravetz, where we had a lot of fun and relaxed. We especially liked especially the Salted saltwater lake for aqua-meditation and the steam bath.

 

at a SPA resort => according to American English :)

 

we had a lot of fun and relaxed => relaxation is also okay.


Me and my wife = spoken English only // My wife and I = proper written form

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Fifty-word story

Hi Everyone,

Please, for your assistance if it is therethere are any mistakes.
This is a fifty-word story (not including the title)
--------------

A holiday romance


It was the middle of the summer in the hot month of August, it was boiling a lot. Me and my wife were in a SPA resort RIU Pravetz, where we had a lot of fun and relaxation. We liked especiallyespecially liked the Ssalted lake for aqua-meditation and the Ssteam bath

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