How is my translation?
《心中的诗和童话》
汪国真
雪轻轻落下
那是多少人心中的
诗和童话
这是开得最短暂
也是开得最多的花啊
凉凉的
却不知温暖了
多少心灵的家
The Poems and Fairy Tales in People’s Hearts
Wang Guozhen
Snowflakes are dropping gently.
These are the poems and fairy tales
In many people’s hearts.
And these are the flowers
That bloom most
And last for the shortest time.
They are cold,
Yet they warm many people’s hearts.
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How is my translation?
《心中的诗和童话》
汪国真
雪轻轻落下
那是多少人心中的
诗和童话
这是开得最短暂
也是开得最多的花啊
凉凉的
却不知温暖了
多少心灵的家
The Poems and Fairy Tales in People’s Hearts
Wang Guozhen
Snowflakes are dropping gently.
These are the poems and fairy tales
In many people’s hearts.
And these are the flowers
That bloom most the biggest
And last for the shortest time.
Beautiful. the change just makes the meaning a little cleared in English.
They are cold,
Yet they warm many people’s hearts.
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翻译的不错，我觉得用“That bloom the most”比较好。因为听着像汪国真说最多，不是最大。
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