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It's hard to go step out of your 'safety comfort zone'
There is a famous talk saying, 'Everything has starts with a single step'. Everyone knows that; however, not all people move from thinking thought to action. Stepping out of our safety comfort zone is very difficult but it's essential in order to improve our quality of life quality. For now, I will not be afraid to go step out of my safety comfort zone and I'll crush all obstacles to by stepping out.
'천릿길도 한 걸음 부터'라는 말은 유명합니다. 모두가 그걸 알고 있지요. 그렇지만 모든 사람들이 생각을 행동으로 옮기지는 못합니다. 자신의 안전지대로부터 빠져나오는 것은 매우 힘들지만, 삶의 질을 높이기 위한 필수적인 것입니다. 지금부터 저는 제 안전지대를 빠져나오는 것을 두려워하지 않을 것입니다. 그리고 방해하는 모든 것들을 돌파할 것 입니다.
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It's hard to go out of my 'safety zone'
There is a famous quote talk, 'Everything has a single step'. Everyone knows that. However, not all people move their thinking into action. Stepping out of our safety zone is very difficult, but it's essential to improve our quality of life quality. For now, I will not be afraid to go out my safety zone and I'll crush all obstacles to stepping out in my way.
'천릿길도 한 걸음 부터'라는 말은 유명합니다. 모두가 그걸 알고 있지요. 그렇지만 모든 사람들이 생각을 행동으로 옮기지는 못합니다. 자신의 안전지대로부터 빠져나오는 것은 매우 힘들지만, 삶의 질을 높이기 위한 필수적인 것입니다. 지금부터 저는 제 안전지대를 빠져나오는 것을 두려워하지 않을 것입니다. 그리고 방해하는 모든 것들을 돌파할 것 입니다.
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