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The wording of the third paragraph was rather confusing, so I rewrote it in a more natural way.
This film taught me a lot of life lessons. First, despite how different the characters' backgrounds were, they overcame their differences and found real friendship. But I found another lesson that made me look at life from the other side - that no matter who you are, old or young, black or white, rich or poor, you will never be too different to be yourself.
Good job on this entry - despite the mistakes I was able to understand everything you said!
For me one of the best examples of an incredible film is French movie “Untouchables”. It’s a very strong and heartwarming film, founded based1 on a real true story. The main characters in this story are a paralyzed millionaire in a wheelchair and a simple guy from a poor and criminal crime-ridden2 district. The main idea plot of the story isare the relationships between those two characters. During the film we can see there are a lot of funny moments when highly intelligent, clever and boring society of gentlemen contrast with the simple life of a poor guy from criminal district with simple problems.
1. Though this is not gramatically wrong, movies are typically described as "based on a true story".
2. Again, this isn't wrong but struck me as awkward. Usually the term "crime-ridden" is used to refer to a place filled with crime.
My favorite movie
My favorite movie
I’ve seen a lot of good movies and films during my life, because I’m really like watching films. And I don’t think that I’m absolutely right, but 1. In my opinion watching movies is better than reading books. I like all genres of film. because2. In my point of view firstly3. film must have an interesting and exciting story, then a soulful inner meaning, also is very important to have and very strong actors whose can perfectly play all feelings and emotions on4. their character's roles. In summary all these facts qualities can make an unbelievable movie and give auditory the audience a chance to feel lose themselves in the atmosphere of film.
1. this is implied by "in my opinion"
2. "because" is used for causation, but these are two different thoughts
3. "firstly" implies order, but story, meaning, and actors are not ordered things
4. An actor "plays" a role, but he does not play a feeling or emotion. Alternatively you could say "very strong actors who can perfectly convey the feelings and emotions of their characters"
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