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最近事情 最近我家人感冒。女儿很不舒服,我和太太也不舒服。但是,我们喝很多水,喝汤,睡觉好久。现在比最近觉得舒服。我希望家人不再感冒。没好玩,不高兴。

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最近的事情      It's a nice article.

 

最近我家人都感冒了,女儿很不舒服,我的太太也不太舒服。Great sentence Jeremy.

 

但是我们喝了很多水和汤,而且睡眠充足。 I know you want to express that you have had some methods to against the cold.  “喝了很多水和汤” is better than "喝很多水,喝汤" because you don't want to use two "drink" in one sencence,right?

 

现在比之前觉得舒服了,我希望家人不再感冒。好糟糕,不开心。

 

summary: Jeremy, you have done a great job. You can use the words you learnt to express something happened recentlly. Please pay attention to the mistake" double verb in one sentence".

It's not good in Chinese either, nor is English,right?

Okay I hope you can have a lot of fun in learning a foreign language.

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in Chinese ,there is no use for "没好玩",you should correct it as "不好玩",by the way ,"spent a long time to sleeping" "睡很长时间觉"

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最近发生的事情

最近我家人都感冒了。女儿很不舒服,我和太太也不舒服。但是,我们喝很多水,喝很多汤,睡好长时间的觉。现在比之前觉得舒服点了。我希望家人不再感冒。没不好玩,不高兴。

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最近事情

最近我家人感冒。女儿很不舒服,我和太太也不舒服。但是,我们喝了很多水和汤,还睡了好久。现在比最近觉得舒服多了。我希望家人不再感冒。不好玩,不高兴。

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最后一句话让我想起了一部中国以前的动画片“没头脑和不高兴”。 The last sentence reminds me a Chinese old cartoon,called'A kid without brain and a kid without happiness',soooo funny:P

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