About of me

Hi!
My name Is Allan, I am 21 years old, I study Engeneering of systems and computation, I have to will graduate in one year. I like computer security, i love the soccer and swimming. The Soccer is my favorite sport, I have played since childhood.
I want to learn English, why because it is very important for the (my) life, for mi my career and for me. I will would like to teach Spanish to the (those) people that do not speak this language. I want to know others countries, cultures, etc.
I am living live in Manizales, Colombia. Mi My country it's great, beatiful; the people of (around) here are good peoples.

It is a pleasure.

Good job, well done. Pay attention: In english, we do not use definite articles as often as in Spanish!! For example: not the soccer -> like in Spanish, el fútbol 

Also, while in Spanish, adjectives adapt to the noun (if the noun is plural, adjective will be plural too), in English it's not true. (chicas bonitas -> beautiful girls)

About of Me

Hi!
My name is Allan, I am 21 years old., I am  studying systems and computation engineering of systems and computation, and I will i have to graduate in one year. I like computer security, I love the soccer and swimming. The Soccer is my favorite sport, I've played it since childhood.
I want to learn English as it is  why is very important in my  for the life, for my career and for me. I will would like to teach Spanish to the people that want to learn. not speak this language. I want to learn about know others' countries, and  cultures., etc.
I am living live in Manizales, Colombia. My country is it's great, beautiful; the people of here are good peoples.

It's a pleasure.

About of me

Hi!
My name Is Allan, i I am 21 years old, i I study engeneering Engineering of systems and computation,  I have to will graduate in one year. I like computer security, I love the soccer and swimming. The  Soccer is my favorite sport, I have played since childhood.
I want learn english why because it is very important for the life, for mi my career and for me. I will would like to teach Spanish to the people that do not speak this language it. I want know about others countries, cultures, etc.
I am living live in Manizales, Colombia. Mi  my country it's is great, beautiful; and the people of here are good peoples people.

Is a pleasure.

Allan, yo entendi total. Sigues el bien trabajo.