new year
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Say Hi for the sun today, there’s no different days with the days before. Time would be ticking with the same rhythm. The twilight would be seting in the west and still there’s patters of rain would be erasing a little bit of memories last year. It’s just there’s the hopings blowed out last night, and that sounds and lights was eaten by the dark. Did not long last.
This morning, for the first step, I just need a new calendar. I was preparing when and how to survive my hoping for still would find the out way, Tell fortunes the hoping will be come true. Now Im ready in the new year, 2015.
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new year
page one,
Say Hi for to the sun today, there’s no different days with the days before (I'm not sure what you are trying to say, perhaps past days instead of days before). Time would will be ticking with the same rhythm. The twilight would will be setting in the west and but still there are patters of rain would be gently erasing a little bit of memories from last year. It’s just there’s the hopings hopes blowed out last night and that the sounds and lights was are eaten by the dark. It did not last long.
For the first step, I need a new calandar. I was preparing when and how to survive. my hoping for still would find the out way, My hopes will still find a way. Tell fortunes the hoping hopes will be come true. Now Im ready in the new year, 2015.
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