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Holiday It was my first christmas in the USA after I left Korea. I and mynhuband usually have gone out to downtown on christmas day since we started dating. So we decided that we went to the downtown of this city in the evening . There is a famous river,which is called River Walk,in downtown. I was happy to see beatiful scenery of the night while I walked along the river. Even though It is in December, it was not cold like fall season on the day. I liked the time when I took a walk with my lover in the warm and lively atmosphere. It was also the first warm christmas day I have ever had. However we made a big mistake. We didn't reserve the restaurant in advance. We had to give up the special dinner despite looking for the restaurant that were not crowded everywhere. We bought Mcdonald's hamburger on the way home. It was my only disappointing moment on thechristmas day. However I thanked for all of the new experiences and enjoyed them as much as possible. Apparently, my last christmas day was awesome. :)

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My First US Christmas Holiday


It was my first US Christmas in the USA after I left leaving Korea.


I and Myn_huband and I usually have gone out to downtown on Christmas this day ever since we started dating.


So we decided that we went to the downtown of this city in the evening . to the Riverwalk. There is a famous river,which is called River Walk,in downtown. [There is no river with this name.  "Riverwalk" is a name given to a place (usually in the city) where there is a river nearby and that the area is filled with shops, restaurants and other places of interest to attract the crowds]


I was happy to see the beautiful night scenery of the night while I walked as we strolled along the river.

Even though it is in December, it was not cold like fall season on the day. It liked the time when I took a walk with my lover in the was nice to walk with your beloved in the warmth of a and lively atmosphere; It was also the my first warm Christmas day I have ever had.

However, we made a big huge mistake. We didn't make a reserve the restaurant reservation in advance. We had to give up the special dinner despite looking for the a less crowded one restaurant that were not crowded everywhere. In the end, we bought Mcdonald's just had a hamburger from MacDonald on the our way home. - It was my only disappointment of the disappointing moment on the Christmas day.

However No matter what, I thanked for all of the new experiences and which I had thoroughly enjoyed them as much as possible. Apparently, my last [don't use this because it implies that you are going to die before the next one comes!] This was an awesome Christmas day was awesome. :)

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It was my first christmas in the USA after since I left Korea.
I and mynhuband my husband and I usually have gone out to the downtown on christmas day since we started dating.
So we decided that we went to go to the downtown of this city in the evening .
There is a famous river,which is called River Walk,in the downtown.
I was happy to see beatiful the beautiful scenery of the night while I walked was walking along the river.

Even though It is was in December, it was not as cold as like the fall season on the that day. I liked enjoyed the time when I took a walk with my lover in the warm and lively atmosphere. It was also the first warm christmas day I have had ever had.

However we had made a big mistake.,We didn't hadn't reserved the a restaurant in advance. We had to give up the a special dinner, despite we were looking everywhere for the a restaurant that were not crowded everywhere. We bought Mcdonald's hamburger on the way home. It was my only disappointing moment on thechristmas the christmas day.

However I thanked God for all of the new experiences I had had and enjoyed them as much as possible. Apparently, my last christmas day was awesome. :)

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