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Lost Paradise There is place near my city that is brings many people there. The place is natural and untouched and very beautiful. There is a river falling from mountains and some wild animals live there. People go there in spring and summer weekends. The weather of the place is very cold at winters and people don't like to go there in winter and the number of wild animal increase in winter in order to find food there. Anyway I gone there at winter. Actually I do go to some places sometime for camping often and this time wasn't like any other places, I named it "Lost Paradise". I took the bus at morning of my trip. That was 80 miles far from my city. The last night before I go, I did check the place using Google map. after I exit the bus there was still 6 miles to the place which I had to walk there with a twelve kilogram of back pack. I reach near there at noon and I decided to sleep in my tent for the night and continue the another 2 miles to the place at morning. There was cold. I met a village man there and we talked about my trip and he was wondering why I gone this time of year to this place. He warned me about wild animals and suggested me to sleep at his home, he was nice and I accepted. That was a wonderful night with the alone man. We talked a lot till midnight. Then I slept and woke up in the morning. I walked there to the place no single person was there except me alone and many wild animals footprint. I had a feeling of excitement and fear which I can't describe. That was the second time I said to myself "You're gonna die here" but I continued and saw the wild nature.

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Lost Paradise

There is place near my city that attracts many people. The place is natural and untouched and very beautiful. There is a river falling from the mountains and some wild animals live there. People go there on spring and summer weekends. The weather of the place is very cold in winter and so fewer people don't like to go then in winter and The number of wild animal increases in winter because they are trying in order to find food there.

Anyway, I went there in the wintertime. Actually, I do go to some places sometime for camping often and but this time wasn't like any other places. I named it "Lost Paradise". I took the bus on the morning of my trip. It was 80 miles far from my city. The last night before I went, I did checked the place using Google maps. After I exited the bus there was still 6 miles to get the place, which I had to walk there with a twelve kilogram of backpack. I arrived near there at noon. and I decided to sleep in my tent for the night and continue the remaining two 2 miles to the place in the morning. It was cold. I met a man from a local village man there and we talked about my trip. He was wondered why I was going at this time of year to this place. He warned me about wild animals and suggested that I sleep at his home. He was nice and I accepted. That was a wonderful night with the man, who lived alone man. We talked a lot till midnight. Then I slept and woke up in The next morning. I walked there to the place no single person and no one was there except me, alone and the footprints of many wild animals footprint. I had a feeling of excitement and fear which I can't describe. That was the second time I said to myself "You're gonna die here," but I continued on and saw the wild nature.

 

Very interesting.

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The night was great Amene. You don't believe that the man traveled around the world more than 50 countries and finally he chose to live on the village and doing fishing for his living. He had many old books of Ferdowsi and Sa'di. He told me many stories. I'm planning to see the man one more time again.
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Very interesting story! I bet the night you talked together until midnight was cool!
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Sure, I'll write shorter in future but I liked this story and I wanted to not miss!
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Try to write short

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