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new year resolution In the begining of a new year ,many people would like to make some resolutions as a sign of good wish and incentive to remind themselves to pursuit success and enrichment in the new page of history .When i was a little boy in my jurnior school days ,i always made a full page of list writting what i should do in the coming year. In the list , what i most written are like this --I would get up 6;00 every morning to do morning reading ;I must study hard to win a outstanding ranking and so on .But what I have done following was same day after day , year after year --I ofen set the clock to ring at 6;00 Am ,and when it waken me up ,I would turn it off annoyed and enter into the sweet sleep several minutes later . When i grow up a little bit older ,hoewever ,I realize that time is precious and we will regret if we miss the opertunity .So ,we should walk quicker while we have the light ,before darkness overtakes us . This new year , I also have some secret pleasure .Instead of trmpet them known by all over the world ,I keep them known by myself only .Since the past experience has told me that if we don't meet our commitments ,the resolutiions would be empty words on a page and doesn't make any sense .

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new year resolution

In the beginning of a new year ,many people would like to make some resolutions as a sign of good faith  and incentive to remind themselves to pursue   success and enrichment in a new page of history .When I was a little boy in my junior high  school days ,i always made a full page of list,    writing what i should do in the coming year. In the list , what i mostly wrote is  like this --I will get up 6;00 every morning to do morning reading ;I must study hard to win a outstanding ranking and so on .But what I did  after that  was the same day after day , year after year --I often set the clock to ring at 6:00 A.M. ,and when it woke me up, I would turn it off,  annoyed, and (re-)enter into the sweet sleep several minutes later .
When i got a  little bit older ,however ,I realized that time is precious and we will regret if we miss our opportunities  .So ,we should walk quicker while we still have light ,before darkness overtakes us .
This new year , I also have some secret pleasure . Instead of trumpeting it(?) so that everyone in the world knows,  ,I "keep it to myself" .Since the past experience has told me that if we don't meet our commitments ,the resolutiions are just empty words on a page and don't make any sense .


orange老師,你寫的真好!
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“made a page full of lists" or maybe better: "made page-long lists"
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good !!!!!!

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