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30-day challenge
In about a month from now I'm going to take the TOEFL and I'm afraid my English isn't as good as I would want like for it to be. Using the word "want" is ok there but "like" is better. I'm particularly concerned about my writing skills, because I find that I Repeating yourself there with another "I" and the "find that" is not necessary. lack the ability to create my own sentences without them sounding weird and unnatural.
To put it nicely, my grammar isn't in the best shape. Furthermore, my vocabulary is very poor.
That's This is why I will take this challenge. For 30 days I'm going to write a new entry, even if I don't have nothing anything interesting to say (and, to be completely honest, I think this will be the case). I really hope you guys can help me to correct them my mistakes!
Your writing skills are very very good!! Don't worry so much and just keep practicing.
You will be fine!!
Jerry (English Tutor)
30-day challenge
In about a month from now I'm going to take the TOEFL and I'm afraid my English isn't as good as I would want it to be. I'm particularly concerned about my writing skills, because I find that I lack the ability to create my own sentences without them sounding weird and unnatural.
To put it nicely, my grammar isn't in the best shape. Furthermore, my vocabulary is very poor.
That's why I will take this challenge. For 30 days, I'm going to write a new entry, even if I don't have nothing anything interesting to say (and, to be completely honest, I think this will be the case). I really hope you guys can help me to correct them!
EITHER "In about a month ..." OR "About a month from now ..."
EITHER "even if I don't have anything interesting" OR "even if I have nothing interesting"
Also a bit formal, for example, I would say "I find I can't create my own sentences" instead of "lack the ability", but yours is still correct.
Other than that, very good English!
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