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Be an incapable, tiny temple people Mr. Du Yuesheng, the Shanghai godfather in the early 20th century, has said:"the top tier people has ability with no bad temple, the middle tier people has ability and bad temple, the lower tier people has neither ability nor good temper. Unfortunately, I found I am actually the lowest tier people----no ability, no good temper. Oh My god. Should I congratulate for this important revelation? I have nothing but bad temple. That really scares me. So, I decide to turn over a new leaf. First, become an incapable, tiny temper people. I decide to keep a sweet smile and no longer talk back when my mother nag at me; I decide to keep calm when I deal with the clients. Even when I have to handle those disturbing things like payment, I will still talk in a gentle, soft manner; I decide to show my affection and tenderness even when naughty kids bump into me! I will give them a warm hug. Oh, dear, have you hurt? This is a 30-year-old lady, with her bones turning cold and hard. Did these bones make you feel bad? I'll do those things. Hopefully one day my rough hair would become smooth, silky and soft. Then I will proudly say:" I rejoice at my shiny hair as I use REJOICE!"

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Beoming an incapable, tiny tempered people person

Mr. Du Yuesheng, the Shanghai godfather in the early 20th century, has said: “the people in the top tier people has have ability with no bad temper, the middle tier people has have ability but bad temper, the lower tier people has have neither ability nor good temper.

Unfortunately, I found out (or discovered) I am actually on the lowest tier people---- I have no ability, and a bad no good temper. Oh my god. Should I be congratulated for this important revelation? I have nothing but a bad temper. That really scares me. So, I have decided to turn over a new leaf. The first step is to become an incapable, person with a tiny temper people.

I have decided to keep a sweet smile and no longer talk back when my mother nags at me.
I have decided to keep calm when I deal with the clients. Even when I have to handle those disturbing annoying things like payment, I will still talk in a gentle, soft manner.

I have decided to show my affection and tenderness even when naughty kids bump into me! I will give them a warm hug. Oh, dear, have you hurt? This is a 30-year-old lady, with her bones turning cold and hard. Did these bones make you feel bad?

I'll do these things. Hopefully one day my rough hair would will become smooth, silky and soft. Then I will proudly say:" I rejoice at my shiny hair as I use REJOICE!"

Thanks for sharing Zyan. Do I detect a hint of irony? Don’t forget to spare some of your new found forgiveness and tolerance for yourself!

I recommend focusing on how to use articles (the and a) in your next post.

Happy language study.

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