Economic meltdown in Spain

I would be very glad if someone could correct my opinion essay.

Spain is suffering one of the worst eras in its current democratic history. The economic meltdown is  worse than the coup attempt in 1981.

Indeed, we can feel due to this economic downturn bring about politics involved in corruption and banks, that is getting harder and politicians are cracking down on society. (Dont start sentences with "but") However, is it necessary to damage families and companies trying to discover a solution to solve the situation?

Some of the measures that politicians have taken to "solve" the problem are to increase taxes, cut wages cut or and the privatization of services that until now were for free. (they did all three things, right?) And what about the wages of politicians? What about the current affairs about corrupt politicians corruption accused of stealing money...our money?

In short, Spain ought to undergone several changes to overcome the economic downturn that citizens are suffering.

     The economic crisis in Spain is one of the worst chapters in its democratic history. Some consider it to be as politically daunting as the coup d'état attempt in 1981. Many feel that this situation was brought about through political and financial corruption. Nontheless; the government is repressing its citizens, families, and businesses to find a way out.
     For example; the Spanish Government has increased taxes, reduced wages, and privatized many services which; prior to now, were subsidized. Yet salaries for politicians remain unchanged, as do the high levels of political corruption.
     In short; we are suffering. The Spainish government ought to be compelled toward new, humane reforms which may overcome our economic issues while protecting our society. 

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