My diary

When I was a kid, my parents often took me to different cities. I could't find my own way in these strange cities. I felt terrible.
Then my father taught me how to use a map. After that, I was interested in exploring my new surroundings and I could make my way freely.  My parents put my map skills to use and let me find routes to places we planned to visit in upcoming days.

Now I'm living in a very large city. There are so many places I don't know about. But I'm not worried at all. This is a wonderful feeling. I guess this confidence comes from my childhood experiences.

(i kind of rebuilt and changed some sentences because, even when grammatically correct, they sounded a bit unnatural.  Message me and we'll talk on skype!)

My diary

When I was a kid, my parents often took me to visiting many cities. There was a time, I cannot find ways in a strange cities. I felt terrible.
Then, my father taught me how to use a map. After that, I feel so was interesting excited in finding a ways. Sometimes, they let me find some places that we planned to go to in next day.
Now I'm living in a very large city. There are so many places that I don't know about. But I'm not worried at all. This is a wonderful feeling. I guess this confidence comes from my childhood experiences.

My diary

When I was a kid, (a little informal; use child) my parents often took me to many cities. I cannot could not find my way in strange cities. I felt terrible.
Then my father taught me how to use a map. After that, I was interesting in finding my ways.way to different places. Sometimes, they let me find (try  locate for variety instead of using find) places that we planned to go to in on the next day.
Now I'm living in a very large city. There are so many places I don't know about. But I'm not worried at all. This is a wonderful feeling. I guess this confidence comes from my childhood experiences.