THİS İS A FİRST MY THE PASSAGE. THIS IS MY FIRST /PIECE OF WORK/NOTEBOOK ENTRY/. I HOPE, YOU ARE /ABLE/WILLING/ TO HELP ME. BECAUSE I AM LEARNIİNG AN ENGLİSH

my name is Menes. l am from TURKEY. l /am living/live/ at in the city center. [Bence, hikayeniz anlamsız olmamak için, şehrin adını vermeniz gerek] there are the 3.5 millions people here. the people is wake up to every morning and go to the work. but l 'm a student . l'm studying at university .therefore l don't to needs to wake up every moorning ['wake up' gerekiyor (yoksa öldünüz!), fakat yataktan kalkmak, belki ihtiyacınız yok!!! He, he]. but if l have a my lesson today, l needs to get wake up and go to the class .never mind :)

this is my life. l only whish this life[Anlamadım, l want to travel the world.................. .
thank you..................

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THİS İS A FİRST MY THE PASSAGE. I HOPE, YOU ARE TO HELP ME.BECAUSE I AM LEARİNG AN ENGLİSH

This is My First Entry.  I Hope You Can Help Me

My name is Menes and l am from Turkey. l live at in the city center. There are the 3.5 millions people. They people is wake up to every morning and go to the work. But l 'm a student . l'm studying at university, therefore l don't to needs to wake up early every moorning. but However, if l have my lessons today, then l needs to wake up and go to the class. I don't never mind, :) this is my life. l only whish this for another life, l want to travel the world.................. .
thank you..................