Can someone correct my expressions???PLEASE
I remember, when I saw those black eyes and could spend hours and hours,
some gesture or a smile. It was an unexplainable feeling
I think it was my youth.
Now, after time when I find something funny memories. things I felt when I was 23 years old.
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Can someone correct my expressions???PLEASE
I remember, when I saw those black eyes and I could spend hours and hours,
some gesture or a smile. It was an unexplainable feeling
I think it was my youth.
Now, after time when I find (recall?) something funny memories.* things I felt when I was 23 years old.
* can either be "something funny" or "some funny memories"
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