Can someone please correct this short essay?

INFORMATION FROM TECHNOLOGIES

Many people worry that the tremendous amount of information reachable ("available") thanks to the technology ical progress is most(ly) used for useless purpose. This may be true to some extent but I think in broad terms that the argument is flawed.

Nowadays we have the possibility (ability) to know almost anything in just few minutes. Finding the answer to a question became is as easy as thinking of to the question itself. Probably due to these instant researches people can currently deal with all the questions or doubts that came come to their mind from an entertainment point of view. As a result, it seems that people are misusing that opportunity, moving their interest to more useless things.

However, technologies (y) gave gives us the possibility to reduce research time for important and practical purposes. Personally I do not think I to have done more than only one homework during my years at school without searching the topic on google. What is more, there are people that graduate thanks to the technology (ical) progress, people that work with technology (ical) devices and people that cannot live without them.

In conclusion, I do not agree that we use information more for entertainment instead of (saying "than" after "more for" sounds smoother although "instead of" is not grammatically wrong) useful purpose. On the contrary, I believe that people are sufficiently intelligent to understand the power of technology, using that as it has to be used. Even if there will always be some individuals that will make the wrong decision, the most of us will have the ability to make the right one.


Many thanks to all of you that will take some minutes to correct this writing. Bye

My corrections are very minor, you did a great job!

Debby