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marathon of Berlin Two weeks ago I run marathon of Berlin. It was my 3º marathon and it was a incredible experience. There were a lot of people running and even more supporting. The atmosphere was absom and the weather was great. In this race the Word record was broken by Kimetto. An ethiopan athletic and a long, long time after I arrived to the finish line. But I broken my personal record too. There were plenty of music band and I enjoyed too much. I went to Berlin with my wife an a couple of friends of us. We did tourist for this amazing city. We have been before, so, this time, saw some attraction that we couldn't see in the first visit.

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marathon of Berlin

Two weeks ago I run marathon of Berlin. It was my 3º marathon and it was a incredible experience.
There were a lot of people running and even more supporting. The atmosphere was absom and the weather was great.
In this race the Word record was broken by Kimetto. An ethiopan athletic and a long, long time after I arrived to the finish line. But I broken my personal record too.
There were plenty of music band and I enjoyed too much.
I went to Berlin with my wife an a couple of friends of us. We did tourist for this amazing city.
We have been before, so, this time, __ saw some attraction_ that we couldn't see in the first visit.

 

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Two weeks ago I ran a marathon in Berlin. It was my 3rd marathon and it was an incredible experience. There were a lot of people running and even more supporting. The atmosphere was awesome and the weather was great. In this race, Kimetto broke the World Record, who is an ethiopian athlete. He had already finished the race before I got to the finishline. But I broke my personal too. There were plenty of music bands and I enjoyed them all too much. I went to Berlin with my wife and a couple of our friends. We were tourist in this amazing city before. This time howver, we saw some attractions that we couldn't see in the first visit. 

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