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Papa, where are you going?
There is a TV show that I don't miss watch every Sunday. It's called 'Papa, Where are You Going?' (Because this is a title, it should be capitalized, but smaller, lesser important words {like are, and, the} don't always need to be capitalized.) in Korean '아빠 어디가?' It's now in season two and it's a (Usually you don't have to repeat the pronoun, but in this case it makes a lot more sense when you do. As though you're reinforcing to the reader that it's popular.) very popular TV program in Korea. In this tv show, five children aged 5-8 go on a trips with their fathers who are actors, an athlete, a singer, and an announcer. They usually go to rural areas of Korea so it's a memorable moment for their child who are as most of the children are used to the city life. The children collect eggs out of from the hen house, go to grocery shopping to at the traditional market by themselves, and then their fathers cook for them. Without having their moms, around both children and fathers have troubles at first, but by doing this they get closer and closer more and more. (It's really difficult to know sometimes where to repeat pronouns, or when to repeat certain words for emphasis, so that's something that will come in time, when you learn what sounds natural!)
I personally (Here, because you've said 'I', we know it's a personal experience, so it's not necessary to say 'personally'. If you want to use it for emphasis, you can, but it should be writting 'I, personally, have never...') have never traveled with my father alone. The trips were either with my grandfather and us(me and my two sisters or a family trip with mom. (Here, I corrected because, it's implied that you and your mother are on the trip, so you don't need to make sure to say that.) I don't know whether this is why I'm not that close to my father, but if we really had had the father-daughter time like them, things would have been very different from now. But I wouldn't don't blame my father for that, because he was busy working to make living. (If you want to emphasize that he was working for your family, you could say that as well: 'he was busy working so that we could have a nice life.') And I also hope that the Korean children who don't have fathers who can travel with them every weekend like this tv show and that they wouldn't feel sad and wouldn't blame their fathers or make their fathers sad. Considering this, this program '아빠 어디가?' (It's good to repeat the title after such a long time, especially to avoid using a word twice in a row.) is very enjoyable for me but on the other hand however some fathers might feel unwelcoming pressure because of it. Still, I laughed a lot today while watching the show. The kids were so cute, especially the part that when they were trying to keep the eggs warm by blowing their breath after they took eggs out of hen house collected them.
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