First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello! I want to learn english because I want to know the wolrd, to know new friends, to travel, and because of work too. I study computers, I love it, and to

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself Hello! I want to learn english because I want to know the wolrd, to know new friends, to travel, and because of work too. I study computers, I love it, and to learn english help me very much. Victor.

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Sorry, I wasn't here. Thank you very much for corretion

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!
I want to learn English because I want to know mote about the world, meet new friends, travel, and also need it for work. I study computers and I love it. Learning english whould help me a lot.

Victor.

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hello!

I want to learn English because I want to know more about the world, to meet new friends, to travel, and I also need it for work. I study computers and I love it. Learning English would ~~and to learn english~~ help me a lot.

Victor.

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