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Dear Annabel.
Many thanks for your letter. It´s always very nice to hear from you.
I´m going to tell you all about that party. I hope I can do it!
It was the party of my best friend John, it was his 22 birhtday and he invited all his friends, so there were a lot of people.
That party was in his house and we enjoyed ourselves quiet a lot. Moreover, John bought enough drinks and we were all time drinking and dancing.
At eleven o'clock I decided to give him my present. He got very happy because I presented him his favourite film, The Godfather.
Finally, the party finished and we left his house, but we helped him to pick up all things before.
We enjoyed ourselves so much!
Write to me soon!!
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Dear Annabel,
Many thanks for your letter. It´s always a pleasure to hear from you.
I´m going to tell you all about the party. I hope I can do it! - not sure what you want to say here
It was my best friend John's 22nd birthday party and he invited all his friends, so there were a lot of people there.
The party was at his house and we really enjoyed ourselves. Moreover, John bought enough drinks for everyone, so we spent the whole night drinking and dancing.
At eleven o'clock I decided to give him my present, which he absolutely loved! I bought him his favourite film: The Godfather.
Finally the party came to an end and we left his house, but we helped him to tidy up a litte before we left.
We enjoyed ourselves so much!
Hope to hear from you soon!!
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