I've traveled to Tolka Valley Park

Today is was nice weather
so, I went to Tolka Valley Park by bicycle
It's was next to Botanic Garden
There is was the huge field
When i ride rode bicycle, i felt freedom!
I liked everything that such as windy wind,grass,trees...
Sometimes i seated on the grass and drawed the scenery
When i came back home, I was really tired
i thought its too hard that to travel somewhere by bicycle

omg my English isn't really not good! oops
I'll try it !!

I've traveled went to Tolka Valley Park

Today is nice weather -> The weather is nice today.
So, I went to Tolka Valley Park by bicycle. 
It's next to the Botanic Gardens. (Or: a Botanic garden)
There is the huge field. 
When I ride bicycle, I feel freedom!
I liked everything that was windy: the grass, and trees...
Sometimes I sat down on the grass and drew the scenery. 
When I came back (Or: returned) home, I was really tired.
I think that it's too hard that to (it's hard to do something) travel somewhere by bicycle.

omg my English really not good! oops  (Hey, we have to start somewhere!! Just keep learning and have fun!!)
I'll try it !!

I've traveled to Tolka Valley Park

Today is nice weather (the weather was nice today)
so, I went to Tolka Valley Park by bicycle
It's next to the Botanic Garden
There is the a huge field there.
When I ride a bicycle, I feel freedom!
I liked everything; that windy,grass,trees the wind, the grass, and the trees...
Sometimes For a while, I sat on the grass and drew the scenery
When I came back home, I was really tired.
I thought it's too hard that to travel somewhere by bicycle

omg my English really not good! oops
I'll try it !!