Summer Vocation
Today is 8.25,2014.Yesterday is my birthday 15 years old! I go to an Irish Bar with my friends.we drunk Bloody Marry,Summer night,and Beer! and then,we went to a Chinese Restaurant named Green Tea,it's delicious and have a good decoration.i will go to senior high school and have exams The day after tomorrow.I'm afraid of the senior high school,because i maybe will have a lot of difficult homework!!!you know,i'm Chinese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Summer Vacation
Today is 8.25,2014.Yesterday is was my birthday, I turned 15 years old! I go went to an Irish Bar with my friends. We drank Bloody Marys, Summer Nights, and beer! and Then, we went to a well decorated Chinese restaurant named Green Tea, it's the food was delicious. and have a good decoration.I will go be in to senior high school and have exams the day after tomorrow. I'm afraid of the senior high school, because I maybe will have a lot of difficult homework!!! You know, I'm Chinese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Summer Vacation
Today is 8.25,2014. Yesterday was my birthday. I am now 15 years old! I went to an Irish Bar with my friends. We drank Bloody Mary, Summer night, and beer! and then, we went to a Chinese restaurant named Green Tea. The food was delicious and the restaurant was well-decorated. The day after tomorrow, I will start going to senior high school and I have exams. I'm afraid of the senior high school, because I might have a lot of difficult homework!!! You know, I'm Chinese!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Yeah，i am.
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Ahh , i see.u r a small boy
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