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You did well, Tuba, but please be aware that religious notes are against the TOS of italki because they can cause discomfort to other students and teachers.
Turkish Culture
I am a Turkish person and I live in Istanbul. I want to tell you about one part of Turkish culture with parts:
Religious day festival of Ramadan [Ramadan is not one day, so I think it is better to say festival]
We, the Muslims, don't eat any food or drink in during Ramadan. We start not to eat to fast on at the morning "ezan" time. And we don't eat till the evening "ezan" time. This is for to understanding hunger amongst other people. And It is also considered this is to be healthy.
Ramadan is occurs for 30 days in a year. And also We also give money to arm feed [to arm people is to give them weapons] people. This money is for not to be hungry the arm people used to buy food for these people. We support them. And there is a saying: "The person who sleeps when her/his neighbour was is hungry is not with us."
Turkish culture
I am a Turkish person/[Probably more common:] I'm a Turk/I'm Turkish. I live in Istanbul. I want to tell you about tTurkish culture with parts [do you mean: 'bit by bit'?]
Religious day of Ramadan
We ,the Muslims, don't eat any food or drink in Ramadan. We start not to eat fasting on at morning "ezan" [or: prayer] time. And we don't eat till [the] evening "ezan" [or: prayer] time. This The object is for to understanding hungry people. And also this is to be healthy. Ramadan is 30 days in a year. And also we give money to arm people [Dikkat! Yazdığınız cümle, 'İnsanları silahlandırmak için para vermiyoruz' söyledi. Görin Macca'nın mesajı. 'And we also give alms to people.']. This money is so that they will not be hungry for not to be hungry the arm people. We support them. And there is a saying: "The person who sleeps when her/his neighbour was is hungry is not with us." [His/her sorunu: Sometimes it is possible to make the whole sentence plural. 'People who sleep when their neighbour is hungry are not with us'. I do not know the proverb. What is it in Turkish?]
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