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Korea very hot issues Everybody knows korea is seperated ( into? from? by? ) North and South. so almost men should have to go Army not for voluntarily but temporary. Most guys who were in army for a temporary are younger 20s. so they are really like to hangout with friends or extract ther energy. but they are just closed in the nation's obligation barrier. It makes trouble surely. I think they are not matured to commute with others with nice air. and more individualized and violent that has no ciblings are weak. it's too hard

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Korea very hot issues

Everybody knows korea is seperated into North and South.

so almost all men have to go Army not voluntarily but temporary.


Most guys who are in army temporarily are younger 20.

so they really like to hangout with friends or use there energy.

but they are just closed in by the nation's obligation barrier.


It surely makes trouble.

I think they are not taught to communicate to others with nice manners. 

and more individuals are violent.





it's too hard

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Korea very hot issues

Everybody knows THAT Korea is seperated INTO North and South. So almost ALL men should ENTER THE Army, not voluntarily(?)(maybe it should be - NOT PERMANENTLY), but temporarily.  / So almost all men are obligated to serve the army for a period of time.

Most guys who HAVE BEEN in THE army ARE USUALLY younger THAN twenty, HENCE/THUS/THEREFORE/SO, they PREFER like to hangout with THEIR friends or USE THEIR energy. But they are just closed in the nation's obligation barrier. (<<< what does this mean?)

It IS REALLY TROUBLESOME AND I think they are not mature ENOUGH to COMMUNICATE with others PROPERLY.

ASIDE FROM THAT, more INDIVIDUALS ARE violent AND THOSE WHO HAVE NO SIBLINGS are weak.





it's too hard

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Korea very hot issues

 

 

Everybody knows that korea is seperated into North and South.

so almost all men are obligated to serve the Army for a period of time ((((by force)))).

 


Most guys who have been in army are usually ((((early twenties))))

Hence they prefer like to hangout with thier friends or use their energy.

but they are just closed in the nation's obligation barrier.


It surely makes trouble.

I think they are not taught to communicate to others with nice manner.


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