The Process of Rain
Rain is a natural phenomena caused when the water up in the sky are coming down to the earth land.
Rain come from waters, river, swamp and etc. The waters evaporate to the sky and become some cloud. with the help of the wind, the clouds move into the place where the temperature is lower and create waters. Because its too heavy, water droplets fall to the earth surface.
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The Process of Rain
Rain is a natural phenomenon caused when the water up in the sky lands on earth land.
Rain come from waters, in rivers, swamps, and etc. The waters evaporates into the sky and becomes a some cloud. With the help of the wind, the clouds move into the place where the temperature is lower and creates moisture. Because it's the moisture is too heavy, water droplets fall to the earth's surface.
-"phenomena" is plural -- "phenomenon" is singular
-no need for "and" before "etc."
-"water" is usually used -- you use "waters" usually when you are talking about the ocean (e.g., "He sailed the open waters.")
Hope that helps :)
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