A letter for a homeowner.

Hello,

My name is Pablo, I´m a 29 year old an Engineer of 29 years old and I´m from Spain. I´m going to move to Edinburgh in September, I´m looking for a nice place where I can feel like at home. My aim of going there is to improve my English, and when I feel comfortable with the language, I will trying looking for a job.
I´m a friendly, tidy, open minded and easy going person, I enjoy sports, going  to the theatre and speaking to people. keep a good conversation with someone.
I need a desk with light to study. I would like prefer living close to that the house would have some amenities close like a markets, gyms, malls, good public transport  communication and an English academy above all.

I wait your answer, I hope to hear from you soon and that I hope we have the opportunity of meeting. knowing us at least.

Kind regards.

American English Corrections

A Letter for Seeking a Place to Stay in Edinburgh

Hello,

My name is Pablo. I'm an engineer of 29 years old and I'm from Spain. I'm going to move to Edinburgh in September and I'm looking for a nice place where I can feel like I'm at home. or just "I can feel at home." My reason for coming there is to improve my English, and when I feel comfortable enough with the language, I'm going to try to find for a job.

I'm a friendly, tidy, open-minded and easygoing or "easy-going" person, I enjoy sports, go to theatre and I can carry a good conversation with someone.

I need a desk with a light to study. I would like that the house would have some amenities close by  like shopping markets, gyms, malls, a good public transportation system, communication places to socialize, and an English academy or "English language school" above all else.

I await your answer, and I hope we will have the opportunity to at least get to know each other.

Kind regards. or "Best regards"

Very well done!