Practice 4

The importance of computer programming has been increasing throughout the past XX years. >>In order to make the present perfect tense sound more fluid, it would be better if you describe it as a change over time<< As the structure of businesses to be computerised all over the world, As businesses all over the world continue to be structured around computers, ability of using computer proficiency is being becoming important a highly desirable ability. The importance of this ability will keep increasing more as time goes on. As the demand of programmers from companies have increased rise, many a greater number of students subsequently choose computer-related majors in university. It is a big advantage when they graduate because people who studied graduate in other majors have felt defficulites to get often experience difficulties when searching for a job. This is a the reason why you should consider seriously consider choosing your choice of major in university. Some people choose majors according to their interests or just because they like the major, but this could is not be a good decision after graduating. Now I sometimes I'm thinking like about what it would be like if I chose different major when I was freshman. Maybe I could would have more options to get a job options now. It's complicated. Life, which doesn't have a correct answers like an exam questions do, has a lot of ways paths with that lead to an unforeseeable future. I don't know what I would be now, will be in ten years, but I wish I could feel satisfaction on hope I will feel satisfied with my life after ten years. I want to be a happy person.

Practice 4

The importance of computer programming has been increasing (maybe add "all over the world" to make the sentence make more sense). As the structure of businesses to be computerised all over the world, ability of using computer is being important. The importance of this ability will keep increasing more as time goes on. As demand of programmers from companies have(has) increased, many number of students choose computer major in university(to major in computers at university. It is a big advantage when they graduate because people who studied other majors have felt (experienced) defficulites (difficulties*) to get (when searching for) a job. This is a reason why you should consider seriously choosing your major in university. Some people choose majors according to their interests or just (because) they like it, but this could not be a good decision after gradating (graduating*). Now(,) sometimes I 'm thinking like (think) what if I chose (a) different major when I was freshman? Maybe I could have more options to get a job now. It's complicate (complicated*). Life, which doesn't have a correct answer like an exam questions, has a lot of ways(paths) with (an) unforseen future. I don't know what I would be now, but I wish I could feel satisfaction on my life after ten years. I want to be a happy person.

Good job! :)