some sentences ..
Some people are so busy that they ignore the traffic light aiming to save time. While others without the awareness of safety keep the thought that the drivers have to stop, because there are so many people crossing the road.
these are the sentences used in my final English exam.. but my teacher think that these are in lack of color..or there are some mistakes!?
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Some Sentences ..
Some people are so busy that they ignore the traffic lights aiming to save time. While others without the awareness self-preservation instincts/any thought of safety keep the thought stick to the belief that the drivers have to stop, because there are so many people crossing the road.
these are the sentences used in my final English exam.. but my teacher thinks that these are in lacking in of color... or there are some mistakes!?
He's right, but he really should be specific, not so vague! Not so sure about colour however. There are seldom marks for colour!
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