Could someone correct my grammatical mistakes or unnatural sentences? I've been praticing essay writing and I wrote some sentences but i don't know if they seem natural or gramatically correct to put in an essay or not.... so plz help me out!! 1. Human beings are innate inventors and innovators 2. We have been trying endlessly toward higher satisfactions in our lives. 3. In this moment, we should carefully consider about benefits of the developement and the shortcomings that come along with it. 4. Cellphone is a terrific example which this generation is proposing. 5. We cannot refute about benefits of cellphone but there is always price for these. 6. Many people are experiencing uncomfortable mind everyday feeling bound by the cellphones. 7. Moreover, the danger of talking through cellphone while driving is a well-known fact. 8. If we cannot deal with the bad sides of progress, we might become slaves of the technology which we developed in order to improve our livings. i wrote these and even though they are grammatically correct but they still seem really weird or unmatched or unnatural...:( so could anyone fix these sentences using more academic level of words and structure??