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旅行 Travel
Here is my entry and what I am trying to say in English below:
前年圣诞节我、我的太太和我的女儿我们一起去旅行。 我们先坐了飞机从北卡州到德国, 然后我们开车从慕尼黑到Fussen 市。Fussen在巴伐利亚,它风景太美了。我们和我太太的姑妈一起订了旅馆。我们的旅馆很美很舒服可是不便宜。在那儿我们过了快乐的圣诞节。圣诞节以后除了太太的姑妈以外我们都坐了火车从德国到维也纳。维也纳有很多古迹和博物馆。我们喜欢在那儿旅游。四天以后我们坐了火车到斯洛伐克国。我有一个斯洛伐克人朋友他接待我们。我们在朋友家过快乐的新年。新年以后我们坐了飞机到美国并且回家。放假后,我不想回去工作。
My wife, daughter, and I spent last Christmas traveling. We first flew from North Carolina to Germany. Then we drove from Munich to Fussen. Fussen is in Bavaria. It is a place of beautiful scenery. We booked a hotel with my wife's aunt. it was both beautiful and comfortable, but it was not cheap. We happily spent our Christmas there. After Christmas, with the exception of my wife's aunt, we took a train to Vienna. Vienna has many historic sites and museums. We really enjoyed sightseeing there. After four days we took a train to Slovakia. I have a Slovak friend who picked us up. We spent a happy new year with my friends family. After New Years, we flew back to the US and returned home. After the vacation, I did not want to go back to work.
旅行 Travel
Here is my entry and what I am trying to say in English below:
裙年去年圣诞节我和我的太太和、我的女儿我们过去旅行。 我们先坐了飞机从北卡州到德国。 然后我们开车了从慕尼黑到Fussen 城市。Fussen是在位于巴伐利亚。它有的风景太美了。我们根和我太太的姑妈一起订了旅馆。我们的旅馆有又美有又舒服可是不是便宜。那儿我们在那儿过了一个快乐的圣诞节快乐。圣诞节以后我们除了太太的姑妈以外我们都坐了火车从德国到去维也纳。维也纳有很多古迹和博物馆。我们喜欢了陆游那儿都很喜欢那儿的风景。四天以后我们坐了火车到斯洛伐克国。我有一个朋友斯洛伐克人和他我们接了在斯洛伐克有一个朋友,他来接的我们。我们根朋友家过那个昔年很快在朋友家和他们一起过了一个很快乐的新年。昔年新年以后我们坐了飞机到美国和回家回到美国,返回家里。放假我不想了回工作休假回来后我都不想回去工作了。
My wife, daughter, and I spent last Christmas traveling. We first flew from North Carolina to Germany. Then we drove from Munich to Fussen. Fussen is in Bavaria. It is a place of beautiful scenery. We booked a hotel with my wife's aunt. it was both beautiful and comfortable, but it was not cheap. We happily spent our Christmas there. After Christmas, with the exception of my wife's aunt, we took a train to Vienna. Vienna has many historic sites and museums. We really enjoyed sightseeing there. After four days we took a train to Slovakia. I have a Slovak friend who picked us up. We spent a happy new year with my friends family. After New Years, we flew back to the US and returned home. After the vacation, I did not want to go back to work.
整体都表述的很清楚,其中有整个句子修改的,是因为这样说更符合中国人的说法。
旅行 Travel
Here is my entry and what I am trying to say in English below:
前裙年的圣诞节, 我我的与太太和我的女儿在我们过旅行。首 我们先坐了飞机从北卡州飞到德国。 然后我们开车了从慕尼黑开车到Fussen 城市。Fussen是在巴伐利亚。它有风景太美了[or 风景甚美, or from your original, "...是个非常幽美的地方"]。和我们跟根我太太的姑妈一起订了旅馆。我们的旅馆有美有华的舒服, 但价錢也可是不是便宜啊。这样就渡那儿我们过一个圣诞节快乐的圣诞节了。圣诞节以后我们除了太太的姑妈以外我们一家都坐了火车从德国坐火车底达到维也纳了。此处维也纳有很多古迹和博物馆。我们喜欢在这了陆游那儿观光遊玩。四天以后又我们坐了火车到斯洛伐克国。这里, 我有一个朋友, 是斯洛伐克人和他来我们接了。[Thankfully that you have your original. What I have corrected is totally different because I guessed differently. What it should be is, 我有个斯洛伐克朋友来接我们] 我们跟根朋友家过那个昔年很快。这样和朋友的家一起过一个新年快乐了. 新昔年以后我们坐了就起飞机到归美国, 和回家了。放假我渡假后, 在旅遊之气氛下, 不想了回工了作。
My wife, daughter, and I spent last Christmas traveling.
We first flew from North Carolina to Germany. Then we drove from Munich to Fussen. Fussen is in Bavaria. It is a place of beautiful scenery. We booked a hotel with my wife's aunt. it was both beautiful and comfortable, but it was not cheap. We happily spent our Christmas there. After Christmas, with the exception of my wife's aunt, we took a train to Vienna. Vienna has many historic sites and museums. We really enjoyed sightseeing there. After four days we took a train to Slovakia. I have a Slovak friend who picked us up. We spent a happy New Year with my friend's family. After the New Years, we flew back to the US and returned home. After the vacation, I did not want to go back to work.
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