About me
I am a webdesigner from Moscow. I graduated from University, majoring in journalism. I like to draw and listen to music, learning to play the bass guitar, writing poetry. I want to learn English, to work with foreign customers and microstocks. At italki I hope to find native English speakers who are learning Russian language, so we can help each other in learning the language. I would like to find friends from Australia, because I really interested in this country, I would like to learn more about the culture and life in this country, especially about Australian webdesign!
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About me
I am a web–designer from Moscow. I graduated from university, majoring in journalism. I like to draw and listen to music. I am learning to play the bass guitar, writing poetry.
I want to learn English, in order to work with foreign customers and microstocks. On iTalki, I hope to find native English speakers, who are learning the Russian language /or "who are learning Russian"/, so we can help each other in learning the language/so we can help each other learn Russian and English/. I would like to find friends from Australia, because I am really interested in this country. I would like to learn more "about the culture and life in this country"/about Australian life and culture/, especially about Australian web-design!
Прекрасно написано! У меня есть родственники, которые живут в Австралии. Я туда полечу в августе! :)
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About me
I am a webdesigner from Moscow. I graduated from University, majoring in journalism. I like to draw, listen to music, learn to play the bass guitar, and write poetry. I want to learn English, to work with foreign customers and microstocks. At italki I hope to find native English speakers who are learning the Russian language, so we can help each other in learning the languages. I would like to find friends from Australia, because I am really interested in this country, I would like to learn more about the culture and life in this country, especially about Australian webdesign!
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Hi Stasya,
An observation. Six of your phrases start with "I" which is quite a repetitive style or writing and best avoided. its good practice to vary the first word of the sentences, if possible, as the paragraph progresses. I will draft up an alternative for you to look at later. )
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Thank you so much!
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Hi стасия. Here are some of the things I noticed in your text: I am a web designer from Moscow.--------I like drawing and listening to music, learning how to play the bass guitar, and writing poetry. (In BrE, there's a difference between 'I like to draw' and 'I like drawing'. 'I like drawing' means 'I enjoy drawing'. Moreover, try to use 'and' only before the last phrase).------- I hope to find native English speakers who are learning THE Russian language (or: learning Russian), so that we can ...-------... because I AM really interested...------ ...about Australian web designing.
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