Nature

I like the nature. Yesterday I went to a lake with my family went . Weather It was very hot. There was a field with flowers nearby the lake, I collected flowers. The bouquet was beautiful. I fished. When time On the way back home the sun began to set came back home began sunset. The sun illuminated all the sky. The sky was purple. It was a very beautiful view. I made took this photo. Have a look at it.

Well done! The picture is very beautiful. :)

Nature

I like the nature. Yesterday I  went with my family to a lake. The Wweather was very hot. There was a Ffield with flowers nearby the lake; I collected flowers [Or: '... the lake where I collected flowers.']. The bouquet was beautiful. I fished. [I do not understand the next sentence very well. Perhaps you wanted to say: 'When the time came to go back home, sunset began'] When time came back home began sunset. The sun illumin(at)ed all the sky. The sky was purple. It was a very beautiful view. I made this photo. Look at it.