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London advices A friend of mine is in London and ask me for some places to go, then I wrote him: "Try to go to Camden Town as I told you. You can go there by the underground and get off at Camdem Town station. But probably you can go there by bus as well, I think it's better. There you can buy used books by a very good price, long plays, cool clothes and t-shirts... it's a very nice place to visit and have some pints. To go to museus, go to South Kensington. There is a underground station with the same name as well. There you can find a guy from Dracena playing guitar. It sounds weird, but it's true hahaha. " Is the writing correct? Which words/expression can I change to make it better?

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London advices (advice is uncountable)

A friend of mine is in London and asked me for some advice on places to go, then so I wrote him:

"Try to go to Camden Town as I told you. You can get go there by on the underground nd get off at Camdem Town station. But You can probably you can go there by bus as well, I think it's better. 

There you can buy used books by at a very good price, long plays, cool clothes and t-shirts... it's a very nice place to visit and have some pints.* 
To go to museums, go to South Kensington.
There is an underground station with the same name as well. There you can find a guy from Dracena playing guitar. It sounds weird, but it's true hahaha."

Is the writing correct? Which words/expression can I change to make it better?

 

*We often say 'It's a nice place for a pint/ It's a nice place to have a pint' even if we're planning on having more than one! 

 

You give some good suggestions. :) Well done!

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