A dog in camp
The last Friday I went to camp for three days with my girlfriend and the dog.
The camp is near the beach, no too far from my home. The beach isn't excellent, the water is a little dirty, there are some seaweed.
We arrived on Friday afternoon, after that I had gone out to work. We had a small tent, a little table, a burner, and the dog's kennel.
The dog was the attraction of all, the kids wanted to pet him, and the men stopped for looked him.
Saturday night a cat was next to our tent, the dog tried to caught it but he crashed with the table and the tent, and he broke it all.
So we set off to home without the table, on Sunday.
Instead the tent we succeeded to fix it.
The next time I'll check if there aren't cats :)
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A dog in camp
The last Friday I went (to camp)camping for three days with my girlfriend and the dog.
The camp is near the beach, (no)not too far from my home. The beach isn't excellent, the water is a little dirty, and there (are) is some seaweed.
We arrived on Friday afternoon, after that I (had gone) went out to work. We had a small tent, a little table, a burner, and the dog's kennel.
The dog was the biggest attraction of all, the kids wanted to pet him, and the men stopped (for looked) to look at him.
Saturday night a cat was next to our tent,and the dog tried to (caught)catch it, but he crashed (with) into the table and the tent, and he broke it all.
So we( set off to) went home without the table, on Sunday.
Instead (the tent we succeeded to fix it.) we were able to fix the tent.
The next time I'll check if there aren't cats :)
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