Help me doubel check my translation of the song lyric--"Love&Sun"

心我把笑容送给你， In my heart, I send a smile to you.
I offer you a smile face, This is ok, you are translating by meaning.
太阳就升起在你里； The sun will rise within you.
In your heart the sun will rise;
我把拥抱送给你， I send an embrace to you.
I give you an embrace,
花朵就开放在阳光里； The flowers will bloom in the sunshine.
Under the sun will bloom the flowers ;
我把温暖送给你， I shall send you the warmth.
I show you the warmth,
春天就进驻在你心里； Spring will be stationed in your heart.
In your heart Spring will come.
我把温暖送给你，
I show you the warmth,
春天就进驻在你想心里。 Spring will be stationed in your thoughts.
In your heart Spring will come.


我把希望送给你，
I give you hope I send you hope
鱼儿就游进大海里；
The fish will then swim into the ocean;
我把梦想送给你，
I give/send you a dream,
小树就长在蓝天里；
The little trees will grow in under the sky;
我把爱心送给你，
I give you love,
美丽就流动在眼睛里，
The beauty will flow in your eyes
我把爱心送给你，
I give you love,
美丽就流动在眼睛里，
The beauty will flow in your eyes.
啊 爱如阳光，
Ah...  Sun&Love Love is like the sunshine.
情暖四季， warming all the seasons.
Love warms the seasons,
在爱的天地里，
Love begins here! In the realm of love,
我们将爱永远传递。 We shall forever let love be transmitted.
Let’s pass it on for ever!
啊！传递。
Aha transmitting all around
Pass love on.
情暖四季，
Love warms the seasons,
在爱的天地里，
Love begins here!
我们将爱永远传递。
Let’s pass it on for ever!
啊！将爱传递。
Aha
Pass love on.


Thanks a lot!!!