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It's raining ouside
And there is a darkness so deep
There is no color here
And this sorrow consumes me
As if I was immersed in
It makes my days in black and write
You are my sunshine and make me bright
I beg you, don't go away, just come and be my...
My light
On every cold night, my light
When day does not arrive, my light
In your eyes a beautiful sunrise
On my light, my light
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Very nice poem Marcos. There is not any way I can improve on it since it is based on your choice of words to express yourself. Poetry does not always follow the rules of grammar. Keep writing. I think you have a gift for it.
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