Dreams
Hold fast to dreams,
For if dreams die,
Life is a broken-winged bird,
That can't fly.
Hold fast to dreams,
For when dreams go,
Life is a barren field,
Frozen with snow.
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did you write that? I loved it :) Congrats if it's yours!
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Dreams
Hold fast to your dreams,For if dreams die,
Life is a broken-winged bird,
That can't fly.
Hold fast to your dreams,
For when dreams go,
Life is a barren field,
Frozen with snow.
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Dreams
Hold fast to your dreams,For if dreams die,
Life is a broken-winged bird,
That can't fly.
Hold fast to your dreams,
For when dreams go,
Life is a barren field,
Frozen with snow.
Did you write this? It's nice.
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