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my holidays When I was little I used to go to Benalmádena, a region in Málaga in the south of Spain, with my parents and grandparents. It was one of the best experiences in my life. Nowadays I still remember those years, when my grandfather played with me in the beach and we went out to dinner in the night. Actually, I continue going there with my husband and my daughter and I hope she remember in the future how we spent her holidays with us. We use to do a lot of things like I have done it before. A lot of restaurants that we go for dinner are the same that I have stayed before. And we spent our days in the same flat, the same that my grandpa bought in the past. Benalmádena is a popular site here so many times we come across people that we know and relatives indeed. Because of being so popular is better to not going in august because it can be jammed. We usually go in September which is a good month. Then, the temperature is perfect and there are not crowded places. Going in august cost an arm and a leg so going in September is cheaper. Obviously, that it is not our problem because we have the flat to stay in, but it is only an advice. If yu want to hit the nail on the head, you should go there on holidays. By the way, it is also a good place to live. You will find your feet instantly!

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my holidays

When I was little I used to go to Benalmádena, a region in Málaga in the south of Spain, with my parents and grandparents. It was one of the best experiences in  of my life. Nowadays I still remember those years, when my grandfather played with me in  on the beach and we went out to dinner in  at the night. Actually, I continue going there with my husband and my daughter and I hope she remembers in the future how we  she spent her holidays with us.
We use to do a lot of things like I have done it   did before. A lot of restaurants that we go for dinner are the same that I have stayed   as before. And we spent our days in the same flat, the same that my grandpa bought in the past.
Benalmádena is a popular site    place/resort  as here so many times we come across people that we know and relatives indeed. Because of  it being so popular it's better to not going in August because it can be jammed. We usually go in September which is a good month. Then, the temperature is perfect and there are not crowded places. Going in August cost's an arm and a leg so going in September is cheaper. Obviously, that it is not our problem because we have the flat to stay in, but it is only an advice. a tip
If you want to hit the nail on the head, you should go there on holidays. By the way, it is also a good place to live. You will find your feet instantly!

 

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