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A Tale Of My Roommate My roommate has completely obsessed with soap operas. Yesterday was the start of our three-day vacation. There were only she and I who did not return home and stayed in the dormitory still. I went to sleep at 11 PM. She was watching a soap opera with iPad at the time. The room was stuffy. I woke up at about 4 AM by frowst, thirsty, so I got up to take some water. Surprisingly, I found faint light from her bed. She was still staring at her iPad! So deeply had she immersed herself in soap operas that she laughed in a low voice from time to time without noticing I had got up. I think vacation is a time in which people can do whatever they want to relax. But it is improper to relax too far without restraint.

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A Tale Of My Roommate

My roommate has is completely obsessed with soap operas. Yesterday was the start of our three-day vacation. There were only she her and I who did not return home. and stayed in the dormitory still. I went to sleep at 11 p.m.PM. She was watching a soap opera with on her iPad at the time. The room was stuffy. I woke up at about 4 a.m.AM by frowst, thirsty, so I got up to take some fetch some water. Surprisingly, I found saw a faint light coming from her bed. She was still staring at her iPad! So She was so deeply had she immersed herself in her soap operas that she laughed in a low voice from time to time without noticing I had got up.
I think vacation time  is a time in which people can do whatever they want to relax. But it is improper to relax so much too far without restraint.

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