A Tale Of Mine [Good]

One the summer vacation after my third year in an elementary school, my parents told me that I would be sent to a boarding school after the when summer vacation was over. because They told me that they did not have the time to take care of me. This It was such a sudden decision that I hardly had the time to bid farewell to all of my friends and classmates. And I just "disappeared" all of a sudden like some pebble thrown into the ocean. [Use some imagery and exaggeration to make your essay more interesting] Back then to that time, a boarding primary schools were  was a pretty unheard of a thing as, and there was none no one in my hometown. city. As such, I found myself far away from a result, my parents put me into a boarding school which was far away from my home city. I was about ten years old at the time. I did not feel great for the first few weeks after reaching a brand new school and city were not great. I felt uncomfortable with my new environment and were not used to my classmates' accent. And I really disliked to hear hated them when they speak were gaggling in their dialect which I did not understand in the slightest. because it somewhat made me feel I was an outsiderdifferent from them. But after a period of After some time, I realized that since I would have to spend the rest of the three years here, so I must make some efforts to integrate mix with my classmates. And after some As time passes, my homesickness was over lessened and finally disappeared, just like the strangeness of surroundings of my boarding school. gradually began to fade away. [Good essay!]

A Tale Of Mine

On In/during the summer vacation after my third year on an of elementary school, my parents told me that I would be sent to a boarding school after the summer vacation was over because they did not have time to take care of me. This was such a sudden decision that I hardly had time to bid farewell to all of my friends and classmates. And I just "disappeared" all of a sudden. Back to that timeAt that time, a boarding primary school was a pretty much unheard-of thing, and there was no one wasn't one in my home city. As a result, my parents put sent me into a boarding school which was far away from my home city. I was about ten years old at the time. The first few weeks after reaching a brand new school and city were not great. I felt uncomfortable with and were not because I wasn't used to my classmates' accent. And I really disliked to hear they them speak their dialect which I did not understand in the slightest because it somewhat made me feel I was different from them. But However, after a period of time, I realized that I would have to spend the rest of three years herethere, so I must make some efforts to integrate with my classmates. And After some time, my homesickness was over and the strangeness of surroundings gradually began to fade away.

Very nice story! Be careful not to put 'but' or 'and' at the beginning of a sentence. They are conjunctions so should only be between clauses :D

A Tale Of Mine

On the summer vacation after my third year on an elementary school, my parents told me that I would be sent to a boarding school after the summer vacation was over, because they did not have time to take care of me. This was such a sudden decision that I hardly had time to say farewell to all of my friends and classmates. And I just "disappeared" all of a sudden. Back in those days, a boarding primary school was a pretty much unheard-of thing, and there were none one in my home city. As a result, my parents put me into a boarding school which was far away from my home city. I was about ten years old at the time. The First few weeks after reaching a brand new school and city were not great. I felt uncomfortable with and I was were not used to my classmates' accent. And I really disliked to hear them speak their dialect which I did not understand in the slightest. Because it somehow made me feel I was different from them. But after a period of time, I realized that I would have to spend the following rest of three years here, so I must make some efforts to integrate with my classmates. And after some time, my homesickness was over and the strangeness of surroundings gradually began to fade away.

I like your story :)