How to say in correct way?
* What have you done today ?
Today I went with my 2 boys to the Hospital.
We saw a lot of peoples in one grupe.
They are seem really happy with their children.
They took their children into the playground and let children playing with another children.
At 11.30 a.m. we went to ate at Tesco Lotus.
And buy some cakes for take away .
At 13.00 p.m. we drove back home.I was so tired and wanted to sleep.
But my son dosent let me go sleep.
He told me ; Mama I wanted to eat the cakes now.
I open the cakes for him and he said to me ;Happy birth day to you .
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How to say in correct way?
* What have you done today ?
Today I went with to the Hospital my 2 boys.
We saw a lot of people in one group.
They seemed really happy with their children.
They took their children to the playground and let the children (better: them) play with other children.
At 11.30 a.m. we went to eat at Tesco Lotus.
And bought some cakes for take away .
At 13.00 p.m. we drove back home. I was so tired and wanted to sleep.
But my son didn't let me go sleep.
He told me ; Mama I want to eat the cakes now.
I open the cakes for him and he said to me ;Happy birthday to you .
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How to say in correct way?
*What have you done today ?
Today I went with my 2 boys to the Hospital.
We saw a lot of peoples in one group.
They are seem seemed really happy with their children.
They took their children into the playground and let children them playing with another children.
At 11.30 a.m. we went to ate eat at Tesco Lotus.
And buy we bought some cakes for to take away .
At 13.00 p.m. we drove back home. I was so tired and wanted to sleep.
But my son dosent didn't let me go to sleep.
He told me: "Mama I wanted to eat the cakes now"
I opened the cakes for him and he said to me: "Happy birthday to you"
PEOPLE: the word "people" is the plural of "person", that's why you don't need to add "s"
THEM: the word "children" was correct, but I wrote "them" just not to repeat it again
WE BOUGHT: "buy" is present, and you've written all the note at the past
I hope this will help you, good luck! :) Anna
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What have you done today?
Today I took my two boys to the hospital. We saw a lot of people in one group. They seemed really happy with their children. They took their children to the playground and let them play with other children.
At 11:30 a.m. we went to eat at Tesco Lotus. We bought some cakes for take away (to take home).
At 13:00 p.m. we drove back home. I was so tired and wanted to sleep, but my son wouldn't let me sleep. He told me, "Mama, I want to eat the cakes now." I opened the cakes for him and he said, "Happy Birthday to you!"
Good work! Hope this helps....
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