Though I'm slim, but I have a good physical condiation.
Though I'm slim, but I have a good physical condiation. I like play badminton ,skiing and running, I always play badmition with my firends every weekend, I like go skiing in winter and I took part in Beijing Internal Marathon Running Race last month.
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Even though I'm slim, but I'm in good physical condition.
Even though I'm slim, but I'm in good physical condition. I like playing badminton, skiing and running. I always play badmintion with my firends every weekend and I like go skiing in the winter. and I took part in Beijing Internal Marathon Running Race last month.
Nice essay! When you use "and" link not more than 2-3 items in a sentence. Study spelling <<<< punctuation and spacing (yes, it matters). Stay healthy!
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